Rabu, Maret 25, 2009

My practical English Exam

It has been at least 3 month since my last post,this week i have my english pratical exam where i must compose a discussion essay themed "Probabilty of Law to Ban Cigarette In Indonesia"...And here is my essay:'

Cigarette,Should Be Banned or Not?by 2pai

Cigarette production,as we already know,alwaysbecome an unique problem to deal with,especially in our beloved country,Indonesia.A cigarette production in Indonesia involve a massive worker,since it's one of most biggest industry.However,a  rumour lately said in short time period,Indonesia government have an idea to ban cigarette in Indonesia.Here,i want to discuss about the possibility to ban cigarette in Indonesia.

In one side,a prohibition to produce a cigarette have some good effect first cigarette is made up by some essence that could stay and pollute lung in a long term process,such as nicotine,tar,and so on.The essence ussualy lead to lung cancer.So,banning a cigarette will improve people's health degree.Second,cigarette is consumpted by most Indonesian,once the cigarette is banned,smoker can't buy any cigarette,so smoker can save their money or spend the money for more impottant thing such as:food,clocthing,ect.

In the other hand,banning a cigarette mean for a massive dismissal for most workers,as i said earlier,a cigarette is one of most biggest industry in Indonesia,and massive dismissal mean increasing number of workless people.

Without the increasing number of workless people,the number reached a million,and if the cigarette is banned,there will be a massive dismissal,which mean more workless people.Considering this one reason,i think,in my opinion,the prossibility law of  banning  the cigarette is beliow than ten percent.I think,for now, cigarette can't be banned,but, maybe in the future,we can ban the cigarette since it is one of  factor of lung cancer.

Notabene:Since   my grammar is awful,forgive me....